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SuperUkeChan Kami-Sama
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| נושא: Twins (Knock Out)- NC-17 Sun Feb 20, 2011 7:30 pm | |
| המגה-פאנפיק העצום שלי. ♥ בינתיים יש לו 11 פרקים, מתוכם 10 פורסמו כבר בלייבג'ורנאל שלי, פרק 11 גמור אבל אני מתעצלת להעביר אותו למחשב וכנראה לא אספיק להעביר לו בטא היום מה שאומר שיעברו [עוד] שבועיים עד שהוא יתפרסם. >: בכל מקרה, פרטים כלליים על הפאנפיק~ [באופן כללי מאוד. בעיקרון כל פרק יקבל פרטים משל עצמו כי הדירוג משתנה מפרק לפרק~]
שם: Twins (Knock Out) שפה: אנגלית דמויות: בעיקרון הפאנפיק מתמקד בעיקר בחלק מהממברז של סופר ג'וניור, וקצת שייני. אבל על האיידולז הקוריאנים (רובם, לפחות) עושים הופעת אורח פה ושם, לפעמים יותר לפעמים פחות (: קאפלינג (מאוד בגדול, משתנה מפרק לפרק): קאנגטוק, האנצ'ול, קיומין/קיומי, אונהא, יאווק, שירי- אלה הראשיים, בערך. יש עוד מלא קאפלז רנדומאליים יותר (נניח, ג'אהו ויוסו ודברים כאלה~) וזוגות שהם לא באמת קאפל אלא סתם סקס חד פעמי P: דירוג: בעיקרון הפרקים הראשונים בדירוג נמוך, אבל בגדול הפאנפיק עצמו הוא NC-17 ז'אנר: ג'נדרסוויצ', הייסקול-AU, רומנטיקה, קראק[?! זה לא אמור להיות, אבל זה טיפה], דרמה? טלנובלה, בקיצור. עלילה: קים ג'ונגסו מאוהב נואשות בקים יונגוון, מוכר בבית קפה בקניון. הבעיה היא- הוא בטוח ב100% שיונגוון סטרייט, ובכלל לא מכיר אותו. בעיה. ומסביב לזה, ג'ונגסו צריך גם להתמודד עם אחותו התאומה, היצ'ול, שהיא והחברה הכי טובה שלה, לי סונגמין, עסוקות בלהזדיין עם כל אחד- זכר ונקבה. הערות: אני רק רוצה להודות לאור אהובתי שליוותה את הפאנפיק הזה מההתחלה ועשתה לי בטא מהפרק הראשון ♥ אוהבת אותך בייבי 3>
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מספר הודעות : 761 Join date : 17.01.11 Age : 32 מיקום : תל אביב
| נושא: Re: Twins (Knock Out)- NC-17 Sun Feb 20, 2011 7:46 pm | |
| פרק ראשון: דירוג: PG-13 קאפלינג: סוג של קאנגטוק, סוג של האנצ'ול אורך: 3,694 מילים - Spoiler:
Jungsu loved his sister, he really did, but sometimes she could be a little… hard to handle. He didn't understand how she could make so many guys chase after her, while he couldn't even capture one guy. Maybe it had anything to do with the fact that she was female, and he was very much a guy. "Oppa, can you drive me to the mall? I wanna go shopping~" Jungsu sighed. Heechul still failed her driving tests- all of them- so he was practically working as her chauffer. No money involved, of course- Heechul thought that just being able to drive her around was a privilege of its own. "Sure. Like I have nothing better to do with my time than driving my little twin sister around and carry her bags for her." He rolled his eyes but got up none the less. "That's right, you don't~" Heechul smirked, glancing at the open math textbook that was lying on his bed. "You know, it wouldn't hurt you to study some time, as well." He commented while searching for his car keys. He only complained so much in order to make her slightly guilty for taking him away from his studies- the truth was he actually got tired of studying all day, and he wasn't even making much progress with the material. All he could think of was this one person, who he knew would probably be working at the mall this time of the day. And that's exactly why he let his obnoxious little sister drag him all the way across town so she could buy herself new clothes or shoes (not that she needed any, she already had too many on his opinion. So many, actually, that she took over a part of his closet as well, which caused very awkward moments with some of his friends who thought it was his clothes). While they got into the car, Heechul wouldn't stop babbling about her newest crush, Choi Siwon. "I know he's a dork and everything, but seriously, underneath those awful-tasted clothes I know, I know there is an amazing body that's only waiting for me to touch. And, like, aren't Christians supposed to be, like, the best fuckers ever? I mean the really hardcore ones. The ones who suppress all of their sexuality because they love the Lord too much or something. But actually the minute you start it with them, they're the best, they'll never want to leave." Jungsu sighed, trying to keep himself from screaming. "Heenim, listen. I don't mind you, er, having sexual relationships with guys. Really, I don't. It's your life and you can do whatever you want with them. But I do not want to hear about my sister… touching people. Or thinking about touching them. Or, I don't know, having opinions on who would be a good fuck or something. That's just gross." Heechul laughed, pushing her chair into a lying position. "Sorry, I didn't think you'd mind so much. I wouldn't mind if you told me about the girls you've been with." He blushed hard and shook his head. "I am not exchanging sex stories with my sister. I refuse to even go there." And with that, he turned on the music. Luckily, it played TRAX's new song, which was currently Heechul's favorite song "ever". She could be such a girl sometimes. But he preferred the off-tuned-singing-Heechul over the girl who just told him she wants to have sex with the president of the celibacy club. Eventually they arrived, Jungsu parking outside instead of the parking lot inside of the mall, to save the money. Heechul wouldn't stop bitching about the fact that she had to walk across the street instead of just using the elevator ("then don't go to the mall wearing high heels!") and by the time they were inside the cool air-conditioned building Jungsu already had the worst headache of the day. His mood only got worse, if possible, when a high-pitched squeal followed them and before he realized what's going on he was pushed over by a slim girl. "Unni~" The girl was wearing what seemed to be her old high school uniform; the skirt was way shorter than any school would allow, her shirt very tight, especially around her bust area, half the buttons open, revealing her lacy pink bra. The tie around her neck was loose, and her white socks reached up to her knees. Her hair was long and wavy, fixed to perfection, the highlights shimmering under the bright light of the mall. Even Jungsu had to admit she looked amazing, and he wasn't surprised when he saw the heads turning around to watch the two girls who were hugging tightly. "Sungminnie-ah~" Heechul smiled at her best friend, putting one hand on her lower back while the other played with her hair. "It's so great to see you here!" they broke the hug finally, and Jungsu cleared his throat. "Does that mean I'm allowed to leave you until you're done with your shopping?" Heechul opened her mouth to answer, but Sungmin was faster. "Su-Oppa~ I didn't see you here~" and with a big smile she jumped on him, hugging him way too tightly. He could feel her boobs pressed against his chest, her arms very low on his back, almost touching his ass. Just as he was about to break apart from her, she pressed her groin against his, and suddenly her lips were on his. Jungsu didn't know where to bury himself, and Heechul laughing at the background wasn't helping him either. He knew that many guys would die to be at his place right now, and if he'd break the kiss there would be no way he'd get away with this free. That's why he just stood there, shocked, until she finally let him go, smiling brightly. Jungsu only stared forward; Sungmin was slightly shorter than him, so he was able to look past her head. Jungsu cleared his throat again. "Hello, Sungmin. How are you doing?" Sungmin giggled. "Now that I got to see you, everything's good~" "Ya!" Heechul shot out. "Stop hitting on my brother!" "But he's so cute~" Sungmin combed her hair back with her hand, eyeing Jungsu with an angelic look. "And you're not gonna date him, so why won't I?" Heechul rolled her eyes. "Ah, he doesn't even like you. Right, oppa? Tell her you don't like her." Jungsu stared at his sister, then slowly moved to look at Sungmin, who put on a puppy face. "Uh, um." Jungsu's face reddened and he scratched his head awkwardly. "I-I think you're cute. I don't don't like you." Sungmin beamed, jumping up and down. "See? I could totally date him if I wanted to~" Jungsu blushed even harder now, and he tried to think how to get out of this situation. "Omo, but you can't~" Heechul cried out. "It's in the girl code!" "Girl code?" Jungsu wandered, holding back a chuckle. "Yeah! It says you can't date your best friend's brother!" "Does it say anything about sex?" Sungmin asked, devilish smile getting onto her face. Heechul thought for a minute. "I don't know." She admitted, making Sungmin squeal again. "Good~" she said, hugging Jungsu again. He really wanted to die right now. "I think I need some coffee." He said weakly. "Oh, now look what you've done." Heechul smacked Sungmin's shoulder, rolling her eyes. "You scared him!" Sungmin only shrugged, still smiling. "Then let's go for a drink~ There's a coffee shop right there~" she was pointing at the shop right next to where they were standing at. "Uh," Jungsu mumbled; there was only one coffee shop he wanted to go to. "I don't like their coffee, it's American. There's an Italian coffee shop at the second floor, let's go there." He thought it was a good excuse, actually, and mentally patted his own shoulder. "Oh, oh~" Sungmin nodded gladly. "There's a new make up boutique at the second floor I'm dying to try out~ let's go there after~" Heechul squealed, jumping just as much as Sungmin was, even though every time she landed, her face twisted a little. It wasn't very comfortable, jumping in high heels. Jungsu took it as an agreement, and immediately headed towards the elevator, only when inside he bothered to look back to see the two girls following him. Entering the coffee shop, Jungsu felt butterflies filling his stomach. Even though it was useless, that the only thing he could do was stare (and hope that the girls wouldn't notice), but he still couldn't help but smile when he directed the other two into the shop and sat down at the table closest to the counter. He gave one look to see if the person he was looking forward to see was there, and his heart skipped a bit when he saw him there, all smiling and hot. When he came towards their direction, Jungsu though his head was going to explode; it's been a few months now since he's been attending this place every day of the week, just in the hope of being able to see him. He never even spoke to the guy, he wasn't going to his school anyways, but he found out most of the important details about him. Things like, well, he liked working out (that part was very visible though), he drove a blue sports car (it wasn't stalking, he just happened to walk right behind him when he was going home after his shift and saw what car he was directing.) and that he lived not very far from Jungsu's house. He also knew that even though his name-tag said Kim Youngwoon, he actually liked being called Kangin. Jungsu thought this name fitted him perfectly, though he never called him this way. Well, not to his face. He did whisper this name a few times, when… Well, you know. "So, what would you like to have?" Youngwoon smiled brightly at them, opening his pad so he could write down the order. Jungsu didn't think he would be able to speak, so he gestured to the girls to order first. "We'll share one low-fat milkshake~" Heechul said, pointing at herself and Sungmin. "Sure. What about you?" Youngwoon turned to Jungsu. Just as he was about to respond, Youngwoon shook his head. "I know. Black coffee, milk on the side, and cheese cake with strawberries?" Jungsu nodded, eyes big and round. He couldn't stop the smile that came to his face. Youngwoon knew his favorite order! He didn't even have to ask him what he wants, he already knew! That means Youngwoon knew Jungsu, he knew he existed, and he remembered what he likes! Jungsu wasn't just a random costumer to him, he remembered… Youngwoon laughed worm-heartedly. "I know a whole lot more about you than you think, Teukie-hyung~" and with these words he left back to the kitchen, probably to make the order. Jungsu stared after him, blushing red completely. Heechul was laughing so hard she was kicking him now, Sungmin giggling as well. "Teukie-hyung?! What's that supposed to mean?" Jungsu shook his head. "No idea." He said honestly, scratching his head. "Aww, that's so cute~" Sungmin clapped her hands together. "Jungsu has a boyfriend~~" Jungsu cried out, scared. "H-he's not my boyfriend! I d-don't even know who he is, really! He only knows me because I come here often!" Both of the girls stared at him. "Okay, okay, I'm sorry…" Sungmin mumbled. "I was only teasing you, I know there's no way you're gay." Jungsu blushed. Oh, God, if only she knew… "It's okay." He shook his head again. "I'm sorry I freaked out like this. I'm really tired from studying all day." "Omo!" Heechul interrupted the conversation, jumping to her feet. "Sweetie~ My love~" both Jungsu and Sungmin shot their heads to see who she was calling at. As expected, the guy entering the shop was tall and fit, slim but still shaped to perfection. Even though Heechul claimed she didn't have a boyfriend ("it's such a waste of time! Why hanging out just with one guy when I can have every other guy I want?"), but everyone knew that her relationship with Han Geng was different than other guys she's been with. Even though they both slept with every other person they saw, somehow they always ended up together, eventually. Geng always did everything Heechul asked him to do, and in return Heechul wasn't as bitchy to him as she was to other guys. "Hi there." He smiled, sitting next to them, leaning over to kiss Heechul. "What about me? Don't I get a kiss too?" Sungmin pouted. Geng laughed and kissed Sungmin too. Jungsu could have sworn that underneath Heechul's smile he could see the spark of envy in her eyes. It worried him, but in the same time it made him feel happy for his sister. Maybe one day she really would decide to settle with Geng. That would be cool- Jungsu really loved Geng, he was such a good guy. And handsome, too. He could already imagine the kids they will have; with Heechul's wit and Geng's tenderness, it would be perfect. Not to mention, Geng always brought the best side of Heechul. Not many people were able to do that, and it made Jungsu really happy to see that he has such impact on her. At that same moment, Youngwoon came back with their orders. "Do you want anything too?" he asked Geng, while putting the milkshake in front of the two girls, and the coffee and cake in front of Jungsu. Accidentally or not, his hand brushed against Jungsu's when he returned it to his side, and when Jungsu looked at him he only smiled. "Uh, I don't have any money right now." Geng shrugged. "I'll pay." Heechul said immediately. "Order whatever you want, don't worry about it." Both Sungmin and Jungsu stared at her. Since when is Heechul so generous? Geng blushed a little, but smiled thankfully. "I'll just have a cup of coffee, then. The cheapest one you've got." "Oh, shut up, you." Heechul waved his words off. "He'll have café latte and chocolate cake~ the one with the cream and cherry on top~" Geng blushed harder, but Youngwoon only nodded and went to get the last order. Jungsu sipped his coffee slowly, smiling into the cup. Yes, Geng really did get the best out of Heechul. While Youngwoon brought Geng his order, Jungsu just couldn't stop staring at him. Underneath the apron with the café's name written over it, Youngwoon was wearing a black tank top that fitted him perfectly, revealing his muscled arms completely. "Jungsu? Hello? Are you with us?" Heechul clapped her hands in front of his face, and he shook his head from the inappropriate thoughts. "Yes, I was just thinking about how good this cake tastes." ~And how good it will feel to eat it off of Youngwoon's chest~. All three raised an eyebrow but kept silent. That is, until Heechul and Sungmin started to babble about something girlish that Jungsu didn't bother trying to listen to. He drank and ate in silence, thinking to himself. Every now and then he'd raise his head to look for Youngwoon, and it seemed that every time he did, Youngwoon was also looking at him, that bright smile of his never leaving his face. "So," Geng opened, trying to shake his head from the random conversation that was going on beside him. "How are you doing? I haven't seen you in a while. Are you feeling good?" "Yes," Jungsu smiled, thankful to Geng's interest. "I'm just a little stressed out because of all the exams we have. I'll be fine when it'll be over." "I know." Geng sighed, smiling bitterly. "It takes me about twice the time to learn it, since I have to think of every word. You'd think that after so many years here in Korea, it would come smoothly, but it doesn't." Jungsu looked at him, surprised. Geng's Korean was actually really good; sometimes he forgot how hard it might be for him. "If you want, I can help you. It'd be good for me, too, to explain the material to someone else. That way I'll be able to see if I really understand it." Geng smiled brightly. "Oh, that would be great! But…" he glanced towards Heechul, who now was showing Sungmin her newly painted nails (sparkly pink, if you wander). "I don't know if it's a good idea to do it in your house. It'll be really hard to focus on anything when I know she's there." He laughed a bit. "You really love her, don't you?" Jungsu whispered, awed. Geng shrugged. "It's not that. But she'd probably try to pull me out of your room and take me to hers, and if that'll happen… well." He laughed hard, winking. Jungsu let out an embarrassed laugh. "Then why don't we do it in your place?" "Yeah, that'll work." "What'll work?" Heechul interrupted. "Nothing, love." Geng smiled at her, then shot a desperate look at Jungsu, who shrugged in return. Heechul looked at them for a couple of moments, until Sungmin nudged her arm and she nodded. "Well, we're going to do our stuff now. I'll call you when we're done shopping so you can come and take our bags and drive us back home. And you," she smiled at Geng. "I'll see you tomorrow, right?" "Yup, tomorrow." He agreed, smiling. "Goodbye then~" Sungmin and Heechul both got up to their feet, each planting a small kiss on Geng's lips. Heechul wasn't letting go so easily as Sungmin, though. Just as he thought they were finally going, Sungmin bent down and kissed him again, with tongue and everything. Heechul laughed again, this time followed by Geng. When she finally left, Jungsu was horrified to see that Youngwoon was standing right next to them, probably to take the dirty dishes back to the kitchen. He wasn't smiling now, and when he turned around Jungsu could have sworn he was clenching his teeth together. "So, you and Sungmin are an item now?" Geng smirked at him. Jungsu looked at him, shocked and amused and scared all at the same time. "I don't think so. Why would you think so? She's just… Very affectionate." Geng chuckled but didn't respond. Then he let out a surprised growl. "Oh! Heechul didn't leave you money for the things she ordered…" Jungsu smiled, patting his shoulder. "That's okay, I'll pay for it. It doesn't matter." "Nah, that's not fair to you. I don't like her paying for me, and you… I can't ask you to do it." He snatched the bill before Jungsu could look at it, and took his wallet out. "Oh, please, stop being an idiot. I'll pay for it; you just keep your money." He took the bill back and put the exact money he had to pay, plus a very, ~very~ big tip. Geng blushed but didn't say anything, so they got up and left the place. They parted next to the bookstore, Jungsu wanted to check out something while Geng decided he'd just go to the lingerie store at the third floor. He said something about Heechul and silk lingerie, and that's the point Jungsu stopped listening to him and tried to convince himself Geng wasn't going to buy lingerie for Heechul. He spent the next few hours wandering through the mall, thinking about the enlightens he had today. First, he now knew Sungmin wanted him. If not for actually dating, then for sex for sure. And Heechul didn't actually mind Sungmin fucking him. So that means he has to try and find a way to either get out of this situation with a good enough excuse, or go for it and be done with it. The second was probably better, not because he wanted to fuck Sungmin (thinking of it made his gag reflex kick), but because saying no to Sungmin was like admitting to the whole world that you're so gay you'd have to leave the country. And he really didn't want that. Second, Youngwoon knew who he is. He knew what he loves to drink and eat. And he even had a special nickname for him. Not only that, but he also looked slightly jealous when Sungmin was kissing him. He immediately chased this thought out of his head; it couldn't mean what he wants it to mean. It was impossible. Guys like Youngwoon aren't gay, they're just not. Never. Ever. Third, Geng and Heechul really, really loved each other. Obviously, Heechul would want him to be the best man at the wedding. He was sure of that. Even though they teased each other a lot, but they really did love each other. And Jungsu knew that if gay marriage would ever be allowed in Korea, he'd definitely want Heechul to be the bride's mate at his and Youngwoon's wedding. He jumped when his phone rang (it was KangTa's new song, of course) and Heechul was screaming at him from the other line that she and Sungmin are waiting for him at the entrance and that he should come right now to take them home. After 18 years of living with Heechul, he knew he shouldn't let her wait, so he hurried over to meet them. He was silent the entire drive home, letting the girls talk about their purchases without hearing a word they're saying. The only thing he could think of, all through dinner and shower and when he laid in his bed trying to fall asleep, was that he had to go back to the coffee shop tomorrow, and have a proper talk with Youngwoon. Not just small talk but an actual conversation. He had to know how much Youngwoon knew about him, why he was interested in him in the first place, and most importantly- what the hell does "Teukie" means. And then his thoughts drifted off to how good Youngwoon looked with that shirt, and how much he'd want to lick those smiling lips. He didn't get much sleep afterwards.
[מצטערת שזה הופך את הנקודות וזה, אני פשוט לא מצליחה לסדר את זה ;_; אם מישהו יודע איך (ולא עם הקוד כי אז זה לא נותן לי לעשות את ההדגשות), בבקשה תגידו לי ואסדר. ;;] | |
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